What is the most fun part of your job?
학생이 쓴 원문
My job...
When someone who has lived in my living-tel pass an important exam
or get a good job, I am happy too.
I and my employees have to meet a lot of people.
Guest come to my living-tel.
If the guest likes rooms,they make contract with me.
we meet strange person sometimes,but that's ok
Everything can not be good.
강사 첨삭
My job...
When someone who has lived in my living-tel pass an important exam
>> Whenever someone lived in my living-tel should pass an important exam.
or get a good job, I am happy too.
>> CORRECT
I and my employees have to meet a lot of people.
>> My employees and I have to meet a lot of people.
Guest come to my living-tel.
>> Guests goes to my living-tel.
If the guest likes rooms,they make contract with me.
>> If the guest will like the rooms. They will contact me.
we meet strange person sometimes,but that\'s ok
>> We meet strange people sometimes. But, that\'s okay.
Everything can not be good.
>> CORRECT
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