What is the most fun while studying
학생이 쓴 원문
I have fun when I correct all the questions.
Thus, I try to solve questions hard.
Also, when I have more time to study, it is really fun.
It makes me proud about study.
My best study time is 4 hours.
I will break it soon.
Of course, it is really difficult and tired.
However, you can do it!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
We are truly on the right track.
If we just remain consistent and diligent, I know we can achieve new heights.
I\'m always rooting for you.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have fun when I correct all the questions.
>> I have fun when I answer all questions correctly.
Thus, I try to solve questions hard.
Thus, I try to solve questions hard.
>> Thus, I do my best in solving problems and answering questions.
Also, when I have more time to study, it is really fun.
Also, when I have more time to study, it is really fun.
>> Correct
It makes me proud about study.
It makes me proud about study.
>> It makes me proud of what I finished.
My best study time is 4 hours.
My best study time is 4 hours.
>> The best for me is to study for 4 hours.
I will break it soon.
I will break it soon.
>> I think I would be able to break my record soon.
Of course, it is really difficult and tired.
Of course, it is really difficult and tired.
>> Of course, it is really difficult and tiring.
However, you can do it!
However, you can do it!
>> However, I know that I can do it!
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