What is the most important celebration for you and why?
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I think my wedding anniversary is the most important celebration day for me.
I got a married last year. so, I feel a wedding anniversary is the most important.
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I think my wedding anniversary is the most important celebration day for me.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think my wedding anniversary is the most important celebration for me.
I got a married last year. so, I feel a wedding anniversary is the most important.
>> I just got married last year and since then I\'ve always felt that I will always treasure that day.
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