What is the most important change we can make to protect the environment?
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What is the most important change we can make to protect the environment?
I think I\'m a person who has many worries. So, Sometime I worry about the environment in the future. However it doesn\'t occurs to me any good ways. because, I think we have to stop all things, if we are considering about that, even we are using the internet now. But I think It\'s practically impossible. Neverthless, we have to protect the environment even the small promise for ours descendants.
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Hi, Stella! It\'s natural to worry about the environment. We all have a part to play in protecting it for future generations. Every small effort counts. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Jewel
I think I\'m a person who has many worries.
>>I think I\'m someone who has a lot of worries.
So, Sometime I worry about the environment in the future.
>>Sometimes, I worry about the environment in the future.
OR
>>Sometimes, I worry about what the future holds for the environment.
However it doesn\'t occurs to me any good ways.
>>However, I can\'t think of any good solutions.
because, I think we have to stop all things, if we are considering about that, even we are using the internet now.
>>Because I think we’d have to stop everything to consider that, even with the internet being used now.
But I think It\'s practically impossible.
>>But I think it\'s practically impossible.
Neverthless, we have to protect the environment even the small promise for ours descendants.
>>Nevertheless, we have to protect the environment, even if it\'s just a small promise to our descendants.
OR
>>Nevertheless, we must protect the environment, even with small promises to future generations.
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