What is the most important issue facing the environmet today?
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Today the most important issue in Korea is air pollution, especially find dust. It makes me irritating. We need to wear masks everyday, it is hard to breathe. I hope it will solve soon.
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Today the most important issue in Korea is air pollution, especially find dust.
>> The most important environmental issue today in Korea is air pollution, especially fine dust.
It makes me irritating.
>> The air can cause irritation, such as burning of the nose or throat, sore eyes, headaches and even fatigue.
We need to wear masks everyday, it is hard to breathe.
>> We need to wear masks everyday as it is hard to breathe.
I hope it will solve soon.
>> I certainly hope it will be solved soon.
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