What is the most important key to maintain a happy life?
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강사 첨삭
Hi Maria! ^^
Welcome back to Monday! ^^
Since we are talking about happiness, I hope
your long weekend and these coming holidays will make happy to
spend with your family and relax. Thank you for the homework.
See you in class ^^
Teacher Glenda
Here are my corrections:
I think there are three key point to maintain a happy life.
>> I think there are three key points to maintain a happy life.
First, physical and mental health are maintained in their family.
>> Correct
or
>> First, Physical and mental health of the family should be maintained.
Second,after challenge and do the best, thanking the situation and adaptaion.
>> Second, after every challenges and doing your best, you have to thank the situation and adaptation.
Third, one live for oneself and others.
>> Third, one should live one\'s self and others.
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