What is the most important quality of a good leader? Please elaborate.
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: What is the most important quality of a good leader? Please elaborate.
I think that professionalism is the most important quality of a good leader.
I have some reasons to support my opinion.
First, a professional leader can make great products. If the products have great quality, consumers would want to make a business with the company, though the leader doesn\'t have good communication skills.
Second, when the leader has a lot of professional information, he is able to deal with complicated problems well and quickly.
[I have a question. If I don\'t know the gender, do I have to use \'he or she\' if I want to use a person pronoun?]
Therefore, the most important quality of a good leader is professionalism.
강사 첨삭
That\'s an interesting point, Bo [이름].
No one has told me professionalism is a good quality but with your defense, you\'ve proved it right.
As for your question, there are a lot of gender neutral pronouns that are not as familiar to the public yet.
That\'s why the safest is \"they\", yes, it is plural, but it\'s now recognized as a singular pronoun to replace \"he or she\".
Merriam-Webster officially added the singular non-binary “they” to their dictionary last year, this signals a major shift in how we view and accept gender-neutral pronouns.
~Teacher Eve.
I think that professionalism is the most important quality of a good leader.
>> Correct!
I have some reasons to support my opinion.
>> Correct!
First, a professional leader can make great products.
>> Correct!
If the products have great quality, consumers would want to make a business with the company, though the leader doesn\'t have good communication skills.
>> If the products have great quality, consumers would want to make a business with the company, even if the leader doesn\'t have good communication skills.
Second, when the leader has a lot of professional information, he is able to deal with complicated problems well and quickly.
>> Secondly, when a leader has a lot of professional information, he would be able to deal with complicated problems well and quickly.
[I have a question. If I don\'t know the gender, do I have to use \'he or she\' if I want to use a person pronoun?]
>> [I have a question. If I don\'t know the gender, do I have to use \'he or she\' if I want to use a personal pronoun?]
Therefore, the most important quality of a good leader is professionalism.
>> Correct!
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