What is the most important thing in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would have to say that there\'re too many in my life. First, The health. When I was young, I didn\'t know about it important. but now, I realized as getting a older, I must steadily work out. Second, The patience. Because Pendemic situation is now, There\'s no recruitment. So, I have to endure until the open recruitment comes out. and lastly, The personality. My parents emphasized to me, when I was young. So, I think about these things that are the most important.
강사 첨삭
You are right, [이름]! You should really take care of yourself. Thank you!-Faith-
I would have to say that there\'re too many in my life. >> I would have to say that there are too many in my life.
First, The health.
>> First is health.
When I was young, I didn\'t know about it important.
>> When I was young, I didn\'t know about its importance.
but now, I realized as getting a older, I must steadily work out.
>> But now, I realized that as I am getting older, I must steadily work out.
Second, The patience.
>> Second is patience.
Because Pendemic situation is now, There\'s no recruitment.
>> Because of the pandemic situation now, there\'s no recruitment.
So, I have to endure until the open recruitment comes out.
>> So, I have to endure until recruitments reopen.
and lastly, The personality.
>> And lastly is personality.
My parents emphasized to me, when I was young.
>> My parents emphasized this to me when I was young.
So, I think about these things that are the most important.
>> So, I think that these things are the most important.
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