What is the most important thing you should pack when traveling?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I pack for a trip, I pack several clothes and shoes.
But not much.
Recently when we go on a trip, we pack a electronic equipment for my husband\'s snoring sleep apnea .
Beginning marrige, I couldn\'t sleep because of his snoring furthermore he had sleep apnea.
So we were checked to a doctor from that time we started using the equipment.
Since that day, we pack the equipment everywhere we go.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. Does this equipment work well? I\'m curious. Kkkk
- T. Beth
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When I pack for a trip, I pack several clothes and shoes. >>>> correct
But not much.
But not much.
>>>> correct
Recently when we go on a trip, we pack a electronic equipment for my husband\'s snoring sleep apnea .
Recently when we go on a trip, we pack a electronic equipment for my husband\'s snoring sleep apnea .
>>>> Recently, when we go on a trip, we pack an electronic equipment for my husband\'s snoring sleep apnea.
Beginning marrige, I couldn\'t sleep because of his snoring furthermore he had sleep apnea.
>>>> OR: When we just got married, I couldn\'t sleep because of his snoring. Furthermore, he had sleep apnea.
So we were checked to a doctor from that time we started using the equipment.
So we were checked to a doctor from that time we started using the equipment.
>>>> OR: So we consulted a doctor from that time and we started using the equipment.
Since that day, we pack the equipment everywhere we go.
>>>> correct
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