What is the most interesting city to visit in your country?
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The most interesting city is Kyung-ju. Kyung-ju is historical city. Many people have been saying that kyung-ju is a roofless museum. If you visit Kyung-ju, You have not to kick a stone anywhere, because the stone can be relic. 50 years ago, many people visited kyung-ju as honeymoon trip. But now, some people visit there to show the city to their children. So, Kyung-ju can be quiet place.
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Hello [이름]ny,
Kyung-ju sounds like a lovely and interesting place, thank you for telling me about it! ^_^
Have a nice day.
Regards,
T. Angelica
The most interesting city is Kyung-ju. >>CORRECT
Kyung-ju is historical city.
>>Kyung-ju is a historical city.
Many people have been saying that kyung-ju is a roofless museum.
>> CORRECT
If you visit Kyung-ju, You have not to kick a stone anywhere, because the stone can be relic.
>>If you visit Kyung-ju, you should not kick any stone because the stone can be a relic.
OR >> If you visit Kyung-ju, you cannot kick any stone because the stone can be a relic.
50 years ago, many people visited kyung-ju as honeymoon trip.
>> 50 years ago, many people visited Kyung-ju for their honeymoon
OR>> 50 years ago, many people visited Kyung-ju as a honeymoon destination
But now, some people visit there to show the city to their children.
>> CORRECT
So, Kyung-ju can be quiet place.
>> Kyung-ju can be a quiet place.
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