What is the most interesting city to visit in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Busan was the most interesting city that I have visited. Busan has the sea and a lot of festival and a lot of tourist attraction.
In addition, I am attending university in Busan. except there is a lot of people, it\'s nice
강사 첨삭
Great day, Kevin!
Thank you once again for expressing your thought through this homework. I appreciate the way you describe Busan as an interesting place. Here in the Philippines, people know about Busan as a place where there is a lot of delicious street foods, will you vouch for that?
I hope to get the answer on your next homework :)
T. Aki~
Busan was the most interesting city that I have visited.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Among the places that I visited, Busan is the most interesting city.
Busan has the sea and a lot of festival and a lot of tourist attraction.
>>> Busan has a sea and a lot of festivals and tourist attractions.
>>> Busan has a famous sea and a lot of festivals and tourist attractions.
In addition, I am attending university in Busan. except there is a lot of people, it\'s nice
>>> In addition, I am attending a university in Busan. except there are a lot of people but it\'s nice
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