What is the most interesting city to visit in your country? Why?

2021-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

학생이 쓴 원문

When it comes to an interesting part of my country, most people will probably go for cities like Hanoi or Dalat. But for me, Danang city, where I am living, is the most interesting place in Vietnam. Danang is one of the most attractive destinations for tourists thanks to its long stunning beaches. Danang is also popular for its set of 6 awesome and quite eccentric bridges as well as centuries-old pagodas, French colonial buildings and that strikes many visitors to this fair city. And You may taste its local foods, which are endless and absolutely delicious.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday, [이름]!
Wow! I love how you described Danang. 
I would like to visit that place someday~
Thank you for this. ^^

- T. Rina

1. When it comes to an interesting part of my country, most people will probably go for cities like Hanoi or Dalat. 
>> CORRECT!

2. But for me, Danang city, where I am living, is the most interesting place in Vietnam. 
>> CORRECT!

3. Danang is one of the most attractive destinations for tourists thanks to its long stunning beaches. 
>> CORRECT!

4. Danang is also popular for its set of 6 awesome and quite eccentric bridges as well as centuries-old pagodas, French colonial buildings and that strikes many visitors to this fair city. 
>> CORRECT!

5. And You may taste its local foods, which are endless and absolutely delicious.
>> CORRECT!

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