What is the most interesting place you have visited during the summer? Could you describe it?
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Obviously, this summer that I think is the most impression. It\'s because I tried to sky diving finally. That\'s the one of my bucket lists in my life. So, Sunshine coast where I visited is the most interesting place. And, I hope the next interesting places where I can see an aurora are such as Tasmania, Canada, or Iceland. As I mentioned to you before, my dream propose is when I travel those places with my wife. While we look at the aurora, I propose to her. Hahaha >_
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Obviously, this summer that I think is the most impression.
>> Obviously, this summer, I think this place is the most impressive one.
It\'s because I tried to sky diving finally.
>> CORRECT!That\'s the one of my bucket lists in my life.
>> That\'s one of the things in my bucket lists in my life. So, Sunshine coast where I visited is the most interesting place.
>> CORRECT!And, I hope the next interesting places where I can see an aurora are such as Tasmania, Canada, or Iceland.
>> And, I hope I can go to the next interesting places where I can see the aurora lights such as Tasmania, Canada, or Iceland.
As I mentioned to you before, my dream propose is when I travel those places with my wife.
As I mentioned to you before, my dream propose is when I travel those places with my wife.
>> As I mentioned to you before, my dream is to propose when I travel those places with my future wife.
While we look at the aurora, I propose to her. Hahaha >_
>> CORRECT!
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