What is the most interesting tourist attraction you’ve traveled to in your own country?

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I bet that there are more beauty in Jeju Island than what meets the eye. I hope I can visit this magnificent place as well. Great thoughts!

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Jeju island is the most attractive place I have traveled.

>>> correct!

There are a lot of tourist attractions such as theme parks, beautiful mountains and beach.

>>> There are a lot of tourist attractions such as theme parks, beautiful mountains and beaches.

Tourists can rent a car without paying a lot.

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>>> OR: Renting cars is very economical.

The price of car rent is cheaper than any places I have ever visited.

>>> The car rental fee is cheaper than any places I have ever visited.

Jeju island is not a big parts to travel, so we can access any places in 2 or 3 hours by car.

>>> Jeju island is not a big place to travel, so we can access any places in 2 or 3 hours by car.

This island is located in the most southern part of Korea, it means that it is the warmest places in Korea.

>>> This island is located in the southern part of Korea, so it means that it is the warmest place in Korea.

We can take a trip without concern about weather.

>>> We can take a trip without concerning about the weather.

We usually are facing weather problem when we travel the southeastern countries.

>>> We are usually facing weather problems when we travel to southeastern countries.

There is a squall, heavy rain and sudden rain shower.

>>> There is a squall, heavy rains and sudden rain showers.

The food is one of the important things when we are planning the travel.

>>> Food is one of the most important thing to consider when we are planning to travel.  

Koreans usually don\'t love eating western food, so we open try to find Korean restaurants when we travel abroad.

>>> Koreans usually don\'t love eating western foods, so we often try to find Korean restaurants when we travel abroad.

Jeju island has a fresh meat and a fresh fish together, so it is easy to find a famous restaurant.

>>> Jeju island is famous for fresh meat and fresh fish, so it is easy to find a famous restaurant.

If my friends want me to recommend tourist place, I will

>>> If my friends want me to recommend tourist places, I will.