What is the most meaningful way to celebrate the Christmas season?
학생이 쓴 원문
The most meaningful way to celebrate of traditinal event is to know and enjoy a origin. because it is a custom.
However, the Christmas is not only religious custom anymore. it is culture something.
So, I believe that we just have to enjoy the Christmas with familiy and friends.
강사 첨삭
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The most meaningful way to celebrate of traditinal event is to know and enjoy a origin. because it is a custom.
>> The most meaningful way to celebrate a traditional event is to understand and appreciate its origin because it is a custom.
However, the Christmas is not only religious custom anymore. it is culture something.
>> However, Christmas is no longer just a religious tradition; it has become part of culture.
So, I believe that we just have to enjoy the Christmas with familiy and friends.
>> So, I believe we should simply enjoy Christmas with family and friends.
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