What is the most memorable birthday you\'ve ever had?
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When I was at high school, My friend who picked a new car locked me in the trunk because It was my birthday. And then He was practicing cornering in an empty parking lot. At that time, I remember being like this and that in the trunk, So this is the most memorable birthday memory.
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Hi Elic!
Oh, dear. Were you okay during that time? HAHAHAHAHA!
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When I was at high school, My friend who picked a new car locked me in the trunk because It was my birthday.
>> When I was in high school, my friend who picked a new car locked me in the trunk because it was my birthday.
And then He was practicing cornering in an empty parking lot.
>> He was practicing cornering me in an empty parking lot.
At that time, I remember being like this and that in the trunk, So this is the most memorable birthday memory.
>> At that time, I remember what it was like being in the trunk so this is the most memorable birthday memory that I have.
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