What is the most memorable birthday you\'ve ever had? Explain your answer.
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The birthday of 8 years old was the most memorable birthday I ever had.
I invited some of my friends to my house and I enjoyed the party.
And it was the first birthday party to me so it was the most memorable birthday I ever had.
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The birthday of 8 years old was the most memorable birthday I ever had.
>> My 8th birthday is the most memorable birthday I\'ve ever had.
I invited some of my friends to my house and I enjoyed the party.
>> CORRECT
And it was the first birthday party to me so it was the most memorable birthday I ever had.
>> And it was my first birthday party so it is very memorable.
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