What is the most memorable or unforgettable place for you and why?

2024-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Sonny

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My memorable place is \'일자산\'. The \'일자산\' is the mountain where in Gangdong. The reason is I have memory that my family had a great time there.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ridoria! That\'s interesting. I have never heard of that place.  But, it\'s nice that you had a great time with your family there which turned into a precious memory.
-T. Sonny
My memorable place is \'일자산\'. 
>>The most memorable place for me is the \'일자산\'. 
The \'일자산\' is the mountain where in Gangdong. 
>>The \'일자산\' is a mountain located in Gangdong. 
The reason is I have memory that my family had a great time there.
>> The reason why it is the most memorable is that I remember my family having a great time there.

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