What is the most peaceful place you know of?
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I think the most peaceful is parent\'s bed.
>> I think the most peaceful place I know of is my parents\' bed.
whenever i lie there, i feel comfortable...
>> CORRECT!
OR:
>> Whenever I lie there, I feel uncomfortable.
my favorite place is my mother\'s bed in everywhere!!!!!
>> My favorite place is my mother\'s bed.
except my house. i feel free in the concert.
>> When I\'m alone in our house, I feel like I\'m in a concert.
i have been there just once in my life.
>> I have been there just once in my life.
i was surprised, because i was dancing in there....
>> I was surprised because I ended up dancing.
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