What is the most peaceful place you know of?

2018-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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I think the most peaceful is parent's bed. whenever i lie there, i feel comfortable... my favorite place is my mother's bed in everywhere!!!!! except my house. i feel free in the concert. i have been there just once in my life. i was surprised, because i was dancing in there.... have a nice weekends teacher!

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Hi, [이름]! Thank you for sending me your answer. See you!

~Teacher Elisha

I think the most peaceful is parent\'s bed.

>> I think the most peaceful place I know of is my parents\' bed.
 whenever i lie there, i feel comfortable...

>> CORRECT!

OR:

>> Whenever I lie there, I feel uncomfortable.
 my favorite place is my mother\'s bed in everywhere!!!!!

>> My favorite place is my mother\'s bed.
 except my house. i feel free in the concert.

>> When I\'m alone in our house, I feel like I\'m in a concert.
 i have been there just once in my life.

>> I have been there just once in my life.
 i was surprised, because i was dancing in there....

>> I was surprised because I ended up dancing.

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