What is the most peaceful place you know of?

2019-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

I think the most peaceful place is my home. Actually, I like drinking all night with friends. So, somtimes I\'m not to come back home. After drinking all night, when I come back home, I feel happy and free. My mother is good at cooking. When she makes good food for me, I feel good. That\'s reason make me think home is the most peaceful place for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Kate!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great nigh ☺♥


I think the most peaceful place is my home.

>> I think the most peaceful place that I know of is my home.


Actually, I like drinking all night with friends. 

>> CORRECT


So, somtimes I\'m not to come back home. 

>> So, I sometimes don\'t go home.


After drinking all night, when I come back home, I feel happy and free. 

>> I feel very happy and free when I get home after drinking all night.


My mother is good at cooking.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: My mother is a good cook.


When she makes good food for me, I feel good.

>> CORRECT


That\'s reason make me think home is the most peaceful place for me.

>> That\'s the reason why I think my home is the most peaceful place for me.

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