What is the most popular agricultural product in your country? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Potato is one of agricultural products in Korea. It was popular products to eat with boiled or with roasted.
when we are in market, we can find it easily and get it with low price per kg.
The shape of potatoes are round type, not square one.
The way of cooking is different by country but many people seems like the same way.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ethan!
Thank you for submitting your answer.
I was surprised to know about potatoes.
But indeed, we also like it boiled or roasted most of the time. ^^
Regarding your sentences, I noticed minor corrections for not using articles.
So, here\'s a short review for using articles: a, an and the
A- used in front of singular countable nouns which are not specific and the noun starts with a consonant sound.
examples: a market; a square
AN- used in front of singular countable nouns which are not specific and the noun starts with a vowel sound.
examples: an hour, an orange
THE- used in from of all nouns (It doesn\'t matter whether the nouns are singular, plural countable or uncountable) to describe someone or something specific or unique.
- used to refer a specific or particular member of a group.
example: one of the agricultural products
There you go. ^^ See you later in class.
~Teacher Gina
>> Potato is one of the agricultural products in Korea.
It was popular products to eat with boiled or with roasted.
>> It was a popular product to eat when boiled or roasted.
when we are in market, we can find it easily and get it with low price per kg.
when we are in market, we can find it easily and get it with low price per kg.
>> When we are in a market, we can find it easily and get it with a low price per kilogram.
The shape of potatoes are round type, not square one.
The shape of potatoes are round type, not square one.
>> The shape of potatoes is round type, not a square one.
The way of cooking is different by country but many people seems like the same way.
The way of cooking is different by country but many people seems like the same way.
>> The way of cooking is different by country but many people seem to like it the same way.
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