What is the most popular drink (alcohol) in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you know Soju? Soju is a famous alcohol in Korea. It has 13% alcohol or 21% alcohol. So you can choose it depending on your feeling. If u want to get drunk easily, u could choose a strong one. And we also have mixed habits with Soju and Beer. It’s called Ssomac. I think it’s easier to drink than Soju. But Be careful, it also has high alcohol. I hope someday you would try to drink our alcohol.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Yoon. Yes, I have tried soju. I like the flavored ones. However, I have not tried the com[이름]ation of soju and beer. Maybe I\'ll try that next time.
Do you know Soju?
>>> correct
Soju is a famous alcohol in Korea.
>>> correct
It has 13% alcohol or 21% alcohol.
>>> correct
So you can choose it depending on your feeling.
>>> OR: So you can choose the percentage depending on what you are in the mood for.
If u want to get drunk easily, u could choose a strong one.
>>> If you want to get drunk easily, you could choose a strong one.
And we also have mixed habits with Soju and Beer.
>>> We also have the habit of mixing alcohol like soju and beer together.
It’s called Ssomac.
>>> It is called somaek.
I think it’s easier to drink than Soju.
>>> orrect
But be careful, it also has high alcohol.
>>> correct
I hope someday you would try to drink our alcohol.
>>> correct
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