What is the most popular place in your country? Describe it.
학생이 쓴 원문
The Gyeongboggung is most popular place in my country.
The Gyeongboggung is where we can see the thing that was in past.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
Please be reminded of the proper use of articles.
Also be careful of your word choice.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The Gyeongboggung is most popular place in my country.
>> Gyeongboggung is the most popular place in my country.
The Gyeongboggung is where we can see the thing that was in past.
The Gyeongboggung is where we can see the thing that was in past.
>> Gyeongboggung is where we can see historical objects from the past.
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