what is the most popular sport in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
pilates is the most popular sport in my country.
there are more than three pilates academies in my town.
so i learned pilates with my friend. it was a very fun and effective exercise.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I haven\'t tried pilates yet, but I would like to give it a try. It seems very interesting.
- T. Beth
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pilates is the most popular sport in my country.>>> correct ( Pilates is the most popular sport in my country. )
there are more than three pilates academies in my town.
>>> correct ( There are more than three pilates academies in my town. )
so i learned pilates with my friend.
>>> correct ( So, I learned pilates with my friend. )
it was a very fun and effective exercise.
>>> correct ( It was a very fun and effective exercise. )
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