What is the most positive change you have experienced in your life?
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강사 첨삭
Hello Rachel!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
It is starting to read novels.
>> CORRECT!
Before I read novels I just saw webtoons so my vocabulary was not so good.
>> Before I started reading novels, I just read webtoons so my vocabulary was not so good.
And I think my vocabulary and creation had been better since I read may kind of novels like myths, romance, fantasy things.
>> I think my vocabulary and creativity has been better since I read many kind of novels like myths, romance, or fantasy.
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