What is the most romantic proposal you can think of and why?
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I imagine that a korean movie star presents me a bank account book which is printed a big amount of money ( The more , the better.)and which belongs to me. I mean the name of that depositor is my name. Then he takes me to an expensive hotle room, overlooking a nice ocean view and bending his kneel and say to me in a good manner. \" Will you marry me?\" and he will say to me\" I have already hired your house assitant and you can do whatever you want to do for yourself. ^^
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Hello!^^
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Cheers!
Jean
I imagine that a korean movie star presents me a bank account book which is printed a big amount of money ( The more , the better.)and which belongs to me.
>> >> I imagine that a Korean movie star presents me a passbook, which shows a large deposit ( the more , the better.) and which belongs to me.
I mean the name of that depositor is my name.
>>>> I mean, the passbook is in my name.
Then he takes me to an expensive hotle room, overlooking a nice ocean view and bending his kneel and say to me in a good manner. \" Will you marry me?\" and he will say to me\" I have already hired your house assitant and you can do whatever you want to do for yourself. ^^
>>>> Then he takes me to an expensive hotel room, overlooking a nice ocean view, and bends his knee and say to me in a good manner, \"Will you marry me?\" and he will further say, \"I have already hired your maids and you can do whatever you want for yourself.\"
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