What is the most shocking advertisement you have seen?(ANSWER)

The most shocking advertisement I have seen is an antismoking advertisement. That ad showed a person who get a cancer from smoking. Also, that ad showed some photos of cancer that can be caught by smoking. The ad said "Smoking, if you don't quit today, there is no tomorrow." with serious music. I was shocked with the photos because I only knew smoking had cancer and I didn't know it was that bad. After seeing the ad, I decided never to smoke.

  

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HOMEWORK:

What is the most shocking advertisement you have seen?

Please answer in a complete sentence.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

The most shocking advertisement I have seen is an antismoking advertisement.
That ad showed a person who get a cancer from smoking.
Also, that ad showed some photos of cancer that can be caught by smoking.
The ad said \"Smoking, if you don\'t quit today, there is no tomorrow.\" with serious music.
I was shocked with the photos because I only knew smoking had cancer and I didn\'t know it was that bad.
After seeing the ad, I decided never to smoke.

 

 

CORRECTIONS: 

The most shocking advertisement I have seen is an anti-smoking advertisement.
That ad showed a person who gets cancer from smoking.
Also, that ad showed some photos of cancer that can be caught by smoking.
The ad said \"Smoking - if you don\'t quit today, there is no tomorrow.\" with a serious music.
I was shocked with the photos because I only knew the idea of smoking can cause cancer but I didn\'t know it was that bad.
After seeing the ad, I decided never to smoke.

 

 

 

 

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