What is the most special memory you share with your sibling?

2022-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Actually, there aren\'t special memory I share with my siblings. When I was youger, I lived in rual country. At that time, there was not anything ti enjoy together, exept going school. But recently I have had e chance to play golf with one of my sisters, of course with her husband as well. And nowadays, I used to call them often. They live an another city far from my residence. We are able to meet only a couple of time a year.

강사 첨삭

Hello Charley!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Actually, there aren\'t special memory I share with my siblings.
>> Actually, there are no special memories that I share with my siblings.
When I was youger, I lived in rual country. 
>> When I was younger, I lived in a rural area. 

At that time, there was not anything ti enjoy together, exept going school.

>> At that time, there weren\'t anything we can enjoy together, except going to school.
But recently I have had e chance to play golf with one of my sisters, of course with her husband as well.
>> But recently I have had the chance to play golf with one of my sisters, of course, with her husband as well.
And nowadays, I used to call them often. They live an another city far from my residence.
>> Nowadays, I use to call them often. 

They live an another city far from my residence.

>> They live in another city, far from my residence.
We are able to meet only a couple of time a year.

>> We are able to meet only a couple of times a year.

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