What is the most stressful or traumatizing situation you've ever been in?
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I have not experienced horrific traumatizing situations.
>> I have not experienced a horrific traumatizing situation yet.
However, I do have a memory that still makes me feel a bit distressed when I recall it.
>> correct
I spent my childhood in a rural area in the countryside where almost all the people in the town were engaged in farming.
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They were extremely busy with planting in the spring season.
>> correct
After the cold winter season ended, the weather in spring couldn’t be better.
>> correct
However, when I came home from school, no one welcomed me.
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There was no one at home due to their busy work outside.
>> correct
My house was as quiet as the grave.
>> Better: My house was as quiet as a grave.
When I sat down on the toenmaru gawking at the sky where a dragonfly was hovering above my head, I felt so lonely and was about to burst into cry without any special reasons.
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The weight of loneliness, the sense of futility, and a total depression were severe enough to completely ruin my soul and body.
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It was not long time ago when I could recall the times without having the feelings.
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Time cured me, but it took too long.
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>> OR: The time cured me, but it took a long time.
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