What is the most stressful or traumatizing situation you've ever been in?

2016-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I have not experienced horrific traumatizing situations. However, I do have a memory that still makes me feel a bit distressed when I recall it. I spent my childhood in a rural area in the countryside where almost all the people in the town were engaged in farming. They were extremely busy with planting in the spring season. After the cold winter season ended, the weather in spring couldn’t be better. However, when I came home from school, no one welcomed me. There was no one at home due to their busy work outside. My house was as quiet as the grave. When I sat down on the toenmaru gawking at the sky where a dragonfly was hovering above my head, I felt so lonely and was about to burst into cry without any special reasons. The weight of loneliness, the sense of futility, and a total depression were severe enough to completely ruin my soul and body. It was not long time ago when I could recall the times without having the feelings. Time cured me, but it took too long.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!

Happy Thursday. ^^

One more day to go before the weekend.

I am thankful that you shared your experiences with me.

I am glad that as time passed by, you felt better.

Have a great day.

Teacher Nina


I have not experienced horrific traumatizing situations.

>> I have not experienced a horrific traumatizing situation yet.

However, I do have a memory that still makes me feel a bit distressed when I recall it.

>> correct

I spent my childhood in a rural area in the countryside where almost all the people in the town were engaged in farming.

>> correct

They were extremely busy with planting in the spring season.

>> correct

After the cold winter season ended, the weather in spring couldn’t be better.

>> correct

However, when I came home from school, no one welcomed me.

>> correct

There was no one at home due to their busy work outside.

>> correct

My house was as quiet as the grave.

>> Better: My house was as quiet as a grave.

When I sat down on the toenmaru gawking at the sky where a dragonfly was hovering above my head, I felt so lonely and was about to burst into cry without any special reasons.

>> correct

The weight of loneliness, the sense of futility, and a total depression were severe enough to completely ruin my soul and body.

>> correct

It was not long time ago when I could recall the times without having the feelings.

>> correct

Time cured me, but it took too long.

>> correct

>> OR: The time cured me, but it took a long time.

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