What is the most time-consuming thing you do in your life?

2023-06-06 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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It was very hard for me to write the thesis at the same time had office work. Even though my work is research, I don\'t have enough time to write the thesis. Every night I sit at the desk to write the thesis, but It\'s hard for me to concentrate on the thesis.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ye Na,

 

I wanted to thank you for sharing your thoughts on your homework and it\'s great to see you thinking critically and sharing your perspective. I have read through your responses, and I understand that writing the thesis has been challenging for you due to your office work. I appreciate your dedication and effort in managing both responsibilities. Your effort and willingness to express your opinion in English are commendable. It takes courage to share your thoughts in a new language, and I\'m glad to see you taking that step. Your commitment to improving your English and pursuing your academic goals is commendable. I believe in your ability to overcome obstacles and succeed in your endeavors. Keep up the great work, and see you tomorrow in our class. ^^

~Teacher Cathy

 

It was very hard for me to write the thesis at the same time had office work.

>>It was very hard for me to write the thesis while also having office work.
Even though my work is research, I don\'t have enough time to write the thesis.

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Even though my work involves research, I don\'t have enough time to write the thesis.
Every night I sit at the desk to write the thesis, but It\'s hard for me to concentrate on the thesis.

>>Every night I sit at the desk to write the thesis, but it\'s hard for me to concentrate on it.

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