What is the most time-consuming thing you do in your life?
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Wow Sir [이름]!
You are really good at calculating things. Hihihihi.
I never thought about the hours that you mentioned below.
Working is really important to people.
In that way, we should know how to balance leisure time and work.
There are instances that we can\'t have a vacation due to some circumstances.
Bu we should always keep in mind that everyday is a blessing.
So we should make the most of our time.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I always wondered how much time we spend on certain activities in a lifetime?
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When our day-to-day activities are summed up into a lifetime, it can be frightening to see how much of our lives goes into these tasks.
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>> OR: When our day-to-day activities are summed up into a lifetime, it can be frightening to see how much time we dwell on these tasks.
A good night’s sleep is vital for every human being to survive.
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Given that an average person sleeps for 8 hours in a day, we will sleep for 233,600 hours in our lifetime, which is equivalent to almost 27 years and one third of our life( if we live for 80 years.)
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Work is a big part of our life and our biggest source of income.
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Let’s say that we work 40 hours a week, from the age of 20-65 and gets two weeks of vacation every year.
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>> OR: Let\'s say that we work for forty hours a week from the age of twenty to sixty-five years and we get two weeks of vacation in a year.
In that time, we will have worked a total of 90,360 hours, almost 10 years.
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>> OR: In that period of time, we will have worked for a total of 90,360 hours which is almost ten years.
Most of us love watching TV as a leisure activity.
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The average person watches TV for 2.8 hours per day, accounting, on average, for around half of our leisure time.
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That means we will watch over 9 years’ worth of TV. Eating, surfing the internet, and driving are the next
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