What is the most useful thing that you own and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think my cell phone is the most useful thing that I own because there are a lot of function.
First, I can connect with other people but if I don\'t have my cell phone, I can\'t connect with other people.
Second, I can use Internet by my phone and if I can\'t use Internet, the day will be very boring.
Third, I can listen to the music so I can find new music and I can play it with my piano.
So I think my cell phone is the most useful thing that I own because there are a lot of function.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
In our lives, we actually have a lot of useful things. All of them have specific purposes that\'s why we need to take care of them a lot. :)
I think my cell phone is the most useful thing that I own because there are a lot of function.
>> I think my cell phone is the most useful thing that I own because it has a lot of function.
First, I can connect with other people but if I don\'t have my cell phone, I can\'t connect with other people.
>> CORRECT
Second, I can use Internet by my phone and if I can\'t use Internet, the day will be very boring.
>> Second, I can use Internet through my phone and if I don\'t do that, the day will be very boring.
Third, I can listen to the music so I can find new music and I can play it with my piano.
>> Third, I can listen to the music by searching and I can play it with my piano.
So I think my cell phone is the most useful thing that I own because there are a lot of function.
>> So I think my cell phone is the most useful thing that I own because it has a lot of function.
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