What is the most useful thing that you own and why?

2021-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think the most useful thing is a smartphone. Because it can search knowledges and how to do somethings. Moreover if I have it, I can communicate someone everytime, and everywhere.

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In our lives, we actually have a lot of useful things. All of them have specific purposes that\'s why we need to take care of them a lot. :)

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I think the most useful thing is a smartphone. Because it can search knowledges and how to do somethings.

>>I think the most useful thing is a smartphone because it can search different information and teach us how to do things.

Moreover if I have it, I can communicate someone everytime, and everywhere
>>Moreover, if we own one, we can communicate with someone anytime and anywhere.

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