What is the most valued thing that I have?

2018-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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The most valued thing for me is a dog doll. One of my aunts bought it for me when I was 3 years old. Since then I have slept with the doll every night. I don\'t know the exact reason but I can\'t sleep well without it. I love the feeling of touching its hair. Although it wasn\'t softer than back then, I can feel comfortable even now when I hold and touch the doll. When I was a child, I started calling it \'멍멍이\' which is a word used by only children and that means a puppy in Korean. I liked it that much. So, it is the most valued thing which isn\'t able to change with anything.

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The most valued thing for me is a dog doll.

>> The most valued thing for me is my dog doll.


One of my aunts bought it for me when I was 3 years old.

>> CORRECT


Since then I have slept with the doll every night.

>> Since then, I have slept with that doll every night.


I don\'t know the exact reason but I can\'t sleep well without it.

>> CORRECT


I love the feeling of touching its hair.

>> CORRECT


Although it wasn\'t softer than back then, I can feel comfortable even now when I hold and touch the doll.

>> Although it wasn\'t softer than back then, I can feel comfortable even now when I hold and touch that doll.


When I was a child, I started calling it \'멍멍이\' which is a word used by only children and that means a puppy in Korean.

>> CORRECT


I liked it that much.

>> CORRECT


So, it is the most valued thing which isn\'t able to change with anything.

>> So, it is the most valuable thing which nothing can replace.

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