What is the most valued thing that I have?
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The most valued thing for me is a dog doll.
>> The most valued thing for me is my dog doll.
One of my aunts bought it for me when I was 3 years old.
>> CORRECT
Since then I have slept with the doll every night.
>> Since then, I have slept with that doll every night.
I don\'t know the exact reason but I can\'t sleep well without it.
>> CORRECT
I love the feeling of touching its hair.
>> CORRECT
Although it wasn\'t softer than back then, I can feel comfortable even now when I hold and touch the doll.
>> Although it wasn\'t softer than back then, I can feel comfortable even now when I hold and touch that doll.
When I was a child, I started calling it \'멍멍이\' which is a word used by only children and that means a puppy in Korean.
>> CORRECT
I liked it that much.
>> CORRECT
So, it is the most valued thing which isn\'t able to change with anything.
>> So, it is the most valuable thing which nothing can replace.
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