What is the perfect fall day? Please describe it in as much detail as possible.
학생이 쓴 원문
Fall is good because the weather is not too hot or too cold. So, it's a great season for outdoor activities.
How nice is the sky high and without clouds?
If you go to the mountains in this fall, the scenery looks like a painting because of the changed leaves.
How good is eating or drinking while watching the scenery?
This day is the perfect fall day.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mr. [이름]!(\",)
Wow! you can be a poet. That is somewhat poetic. Enjoy a perfect Fall day tomorrow!(\",)
~T. Lynn
Fall is good because the weather is not too hot or too cold. So, it\'s a great season for outdoor activities.
>> correct!
How nice is the sky high and without clouds?
>> How nice it is to look at the high sky without clouds?
If you go to the mountains in this fall, the scenery looks like a painting because of the changed leaves.
>> correct!
How good is eating or drinking while watching the scenery?
>> correct!
This day is the perfect fall day.
>> correct!
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