What is the perfect weather for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
My best weather is winter.
Because winter has a Chiristmas.
And in winter, The snow comes too.
And lastly It\'s not hot.
These are my a reason for best weather.
강사 첨삭
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My best weather is winter.
Because winter has a Chiristmas.
And in winter, The snow comes too.
And lastly It\'s not hot.
These are my a reason for best weather.
Because winter has a Chiristmas.
And in winter, The snow comes too.
And lastly It\'s not hot.
These are my a reason for best weather.
>> My best weather is winter. Because winter has Christmas. And in winter, The snow comes too. And lastly It\'s not hot. These are reasons for the perfect weather for me.
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