What is the perfect weather for you?
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I prefer cold weather in winter and I think very cold weather is perfect for me. The first reason is that I like wearing a winter jaket because I think I look very good in the jaket. The most reason is that I don’t have to sweat at all. When it is so cold I can play dodgeball or run in the yard without a sweat. I hate my clothes get wet with sweat.
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Hi [이름]!
Happy Tuesday ^^
T. DON
I prefer cold weather in winter and I think very cold weather is perfect
for me. The first reason is that I like wearing a winter jaket because I
think I look very good in the jaket. The most reason is that I don’t
have to sweat at all. When it is so cold I can play dodgeball or run in
the yard without a sweat. I hate my clothes get wet with sweat.
>> I prefer cold weather in winter and I think cold weather is perfect
for me. The first reason is that I like wearing a winter jacket because I
think I look very good in the jacket. The main reason is that I don’t
have to sweat at all. When it is so cold I can play dodgeball or run in
the yard without a sweat. I hate my clothes getting sweat.
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