What is the purpose of art? What are the reasons we visit art museums?
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The purpose of art are an inspiration to people that they can dream and offer people can see by new and ingenious angle. People go the museums for the cultural life and new experience unlike routine.
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The purpose of art are an inspiration to people that they can dream and offer people can see by new and ingenious angle.
>> The purpose of art is to inspire people to dream and offer new insights and ingenious angle.
People go the museums for the cultural life and new experience unlike routine.
>> People go to museums to know more about cultural life and experience new things different from their routine.
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