What is the purpose of having lifelong dreams? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
While living the life, we need to money. because we should buy some food, things, montly rent and doing cultural life. There is much more cost money. so, we have to be a dream for our life. if we weren\'t a job, we have no money and do not live there. Also, it is important to dream, because of acheive our wish. Therefore, we hope to earn money while we want to things.
강사 첨삭
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While living the life, we need to money.
>>> We need money to live an enjoyable life.
because we should buy some food, things, montly rent and doing cultural life.
>>> And we need it to buy some food and things, to pay for monthly rent and to have a social life.
There is much more cost money.
>>> Those cost much money.
so, we have to be a dream for our life.
>>> So we have to have a lifelong dream.
if we weren\'t a job, we have no money and do not live there.
>>> If we do not have a job, we do not have income so we will not be able to enjoy life.
Also, it is important to dream, because of acheive our wish.
>>> Also, it is important to dream to achieve our goals.
Therefore, we hope to earn money while we want to things.
>>> Therefore, we have to earn money if we want enjoy life.
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