What is the purpose of Heart Month?
학생이 쓴 원문
Most important my purpose is keep healthy.
I will read some books that I want to read before and pass the Korean history exam.
Getting a chance, I want to watch the movie with my younger sister.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna! It\'s good that give importance to your health. Stay healthy and happy. We will discuss about this issue in class. Have a wonderful day! ~T. Lyn
Most important my purpose is keep healthy.
>>I give most importance to my health and my purpose is to healthy.
I will read some books that I want to read before and pass the Korean history exam.
I will read some books that I want to read before and pass the Korean history exam.
>>Before that, I will read the books I want to read and pass the national history exam.
Getting a chance, I want to watch the movie with my younger sister.
Getting a chance, I want to watch the movie with my younger sister.
>>If I get a chance, i want to watch a movie with my sister.
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