What is the purpose of most business trips in your industry?
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My main task is designing and developing the wiper parts.
Sometimes I have to communicate with customer regarding wiper design issue. And I have to check the test result for approving the wiper performance.
Due to upper tasks, I often go on a business trip to join the meeting for communicating the wiper issue and check the test result with customer to customer\'s R&D center.
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Hi, Jayjay!
2. Sometimes I have to communicate with customer regarding wiper design issue.
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Here are some corrections:
1. My main task is designing and developing the wiper parts.
>>My main task is designing and developing wiper parts.
2. Sometimes I have to communicate with customer regarding wiper design issue.
>>Sometimes I have to communicate with the customer regarding wiper design issues.
3. And I have to check the test result for approving the wiper performance.
>>I also have to check the test results to approve the wiper performance.
4. Due to upper tasks, I often go on a business trip to join the meeting for communicating the wiper issue and check the test result with customer to customer\'s R&D center.
>>Due to these tasks, I often go on business trips to attend meetings and discuss wiper issues, as well as to check test results with the customer at their R&D center.
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