What is the purpose of the convention that will be held in Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
We have a big gathering once a year.
Its purpose it to deliver love and encourage each other.
We are happy to meet people who have moved to other provinces.
Especially, I look forward to meeting many Russians who are suffering in their country due to the prohibition command.
The convention will be held for 3 days. The title is \"Declare the Good News!\"
Friday: We can check the clues that the good news of Jesus in the scriptures is an appropriate book.
We can also hear how the scriptures are useful these days.
Saturday: We will explore the prophecies about Jesus\'s birth and childhood and see if they have all been fulfilled.
Sunday: Through a public talk titled \"Why We Don\'t Fear Bad News,\" we will explore why many people can feel peace and confirmation even though today\'s circumstances are getting worse.
Of course, I expect to be very tired, but my heart will be very happy.
강사 첨삭
Hi, MK!
Wow! That\'s a full schedule for you! I\'m happy that you feel excited about this convention and that you really value and devote time to your faith! Hoping for a very productive convention for your church, and may this convention strengthen your belief.
- T. Caitlyn
We have a big gathering once a year.
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Its purpose it to deliver love and encourage each other.
Its purpose it to deliver love and encourage each other.
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We are happy to meet people who have moved to other provinces.
We are happy to meet people who have moved to other provinces.
>> CORRECT
Especially, I look forward to meeting many Russians who are suffering in their country due to the prohibition command.
Especially, I look forward to meeting many Russians who are suffering in their country due to the prohibition command.
>> Especially, I look forward to meeting many Russians who are suffering in their country due to the prohibition commands.
The convention will be held for 3 days. The title is \"Declare the Good News!\"
The convention will be held for 3 days. The title is \"Declare the Good News!\"
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Friday: We can check the clues that the good news of Jesus in the scriptures is an appropriate book.
Friday: We can check the clues that the good news of Jesus in the scriptures is an appropriate book.
>> CORRECT
We can also hear how the scriptures are useful these days.
We can also hear how the scriptures are useful these days.
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Saturday: We will explore the prophecies about Jesus\'s birth and childhood and see if they have all been fulfilled.
Saturday: We will explore the prophecies about Jesus\'s birth and childhood and see if they have all been fulfilled.
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Sunday: Through a public talk titled \"Why We Don\'t Fear Bad News,\" we will explore why many people can feel peace and confirmation even though today\'s circumstances are getting worse.
Sunday: Through a public talk titled \"Why We Don\'t Fear Bad News,\" we will explore why many people can feel peace and confirmation even though today\'s circumstances are getting worse.
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Of course, I expect to be very tired, but my heart will be very happy.
Of course, I expect to be very tired, but my heart will be very happy.
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