What is the right age to introduce gadgets to children? Why?
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I think that it is too young to get gadgets before children be a student.
It\'s 8 years old in Korea.
Because children should play outside and meet many friends at this ages.
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Hi [이름]!
I agree that children should enjoy more time playing outside and meeting friends rather than using gadgets.
~Kelly^^
I think that it is too young to get gadgets before children be a student.
>> I think, it would be too early for children to receive any gadgets before they start going to school.
It\'s 8 years old in Korea.
>> Children start going to school at the age of eight (8).
Because children should play outside and meet many friends at this ages.
>> Because children should play outside and meet many friends at this age.
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