What is the role of music in your life? (in 4 sentences)
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Hi [이름]!
That\'s okay.
People have different preferences and interests about things. ^^
Thank you for sharing this information with me.
I\'ll talk to you in class! :)
~~t. Ally
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Arts can make our lives more relaxed and fulfilled.
>>CORRECT!
I know that some people have radio run or music played in their house or office.
>> I know that some people listen to the radio or play music in their homes or offices.
But I’ve never been mad at music, even in my adolescence and twenties.
>> But I\'ve never been a huge fan of music, even in my adolescence and early adulthood.
Although I am likely to seem dry, I can live without music better than any other people.
>> CORRECT!
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