What is the safest mode of transport?
학생이 쓴 원문
i think most safe transport is subway. there are two reasons.
the first, subway route is already decided. so more less accident percent.
the second, suabway driver is very professionaly.
unlike get a car driver license, subway license needs more knowledge.
so i think subway of transportation is very safest.
unless someone crimes in subway...
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I completely agree with you! The subway operator\'s license exam is very extensive, and they have to undergo several training sessions to obtain it. Also, your writing has shown great improvement. Keep it up!
- T. Caitlyn
i think most safe transport is subway.
>> I think the safest form of transport is the subway.
There are two reasons.
>> CORRECT
the first, subway route is already decided. so more less accident percent.
the first, subway route is already decided. so more less accident percent.
>> First, subway routes are already decided, so there is a lower percentage of accidents.
the second, suabway driver is very professionaly.
the second, suabway driver is very professionaly.
>> Second, subway drivers are very professional.
unlike get a car driver license, subway license needs more knowledge.
unlike get a car driver license, subway license needs more knowledge.
>> Unlike getting a car driver\'s license, a subway operator\'s license requires more knowledge.
so i think subway of transportation is very safest.
so i think subway of transportation is very safest.
>> So, I think the subway is the safest form of transportation.
unless someone crimes in subway...
unless someone crimes in subway...
>> Unless someone commits a crime in the subway.
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