What is the scariest dinosaur and why?
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I don\'t have much idea about dinosaur but my son used to like it when he was in nursery. It\'s name is really difficult to memorize and there are too many species which are meat-eating and plant-eating dinosaurs. Tyrannosaurus is well known dinosaur for children and they think that it is one of the strongest dinosaur. I bought a couple of dinosaurs toys for my son. I like triceratops the most because it\'s appearance is unique and looks tough. However, it is not the scariest ones for me. I might feel scared if I saw Pteranodon because it can fly so it can attack me without any notice. I don\'t think Tyrannosaurus can even kill it easily due to special characteristic.
It\'s really hard for me to imagine how do I feel if I saw dinosaurs because I haven\'t seen it. I have only seen it in the book. Therefore, I sometimes wonder if there were it in the past.
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Hi [이름],
It\'s really hard for me to imagine how do I feel if I saw dinosaurs because I haven\'t seen it.
I also don\'t have a lot of ideas about dinosaurs. It\'s amazing that children can even name many dinosaurs. I am even having hard time naming and pronouncing their names.
I am scared of the ocean so I guess Mosasaurus is the scariest dinosaur. I can\'t imagine swimming nor being on a ship thinking that this creature is under the water.
Teacher Andrea
I don\'t have much idea about dinosaur but my son used to like it when he was in nursery.
>> Correct
It\'s name is really difficult to memorize and there are too many species which are meat-eating and plant-eating dinosaurs.
>> There names are really difficult to memorize and there are too many species that are carnivores and herbivores.
Tyrannosaurus is well known dinosaur for children and they think that it is one of the strongest dinosaur.
>> Tyrannosaurus Rex is a well-known dinosaur for children and they think that it is one of the strongest dinosaurs.
I bought a couple of dinosaurs toys for my son.
>> Correct
I like triceratops the most because it\'s appearance is unique and looks tough.
>> Correct
However, it is not the scariest ones for me.
>> However, it is not the scariest one for me.
I might feel scared if I saw Pteranodon because it can fly so it can attack me without any notice.
>> I might feel scared if I will see a Pteranodon because it can fly so it can attack me without any notice.
I don\'t think Tyrannosaurus can even kill it easily due to special characteristic.
>> I don\'t think Tyrannosaurus can even kill it easily due to its special characteristic.
It\'s really hard for me to imagine how do I feel if I saw dinosaurs because I haven\'t seen it.
>> It\'s really hard for me to imagine how would I feel if I will see dinosaurs because I haven\'t seen one.
I have only seen it in the book.
>> I only saw it in a book.
Therefore, I sometimes wonder if there were it in the past.
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