What is the scariest place you have ever heard of?
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I heard that there are a lot of drugs in San Francisco. Among them, fentanyl is the most.
It\'s really dangerous even in small amounts. They are addicted easier other drugs and It\'s cheaper.
In San Francisco streets, There are a lot of people like a zombie that addicted from fentanyl.
I watched this documentary on Youtube last year and I couldn\'t believe it.
First, There are a lot of Big tech company in San Francisco. Why do they take a drugs?
Second, Many people take a drugs in the street, So everyone is exposed to drugs. What are the polices doing?
Walking this street is so dangerous, It is because drugs are anywhere in the street. Always exposed.
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Hi, Jun!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. CamilleWhat is the scariest place you have ever heard of?
I heard that there are a lot of drugs in San Francisco.
>> CORRECT!
Among them, fentanyl is the most.
>> Among them, fentanyl is the most common one.
It\'s really dangerous even in small amounts.
>> CORRECT!
They are addicted easier other drugs and It\'s cheaper.
>> They get easily addicted than other drugs, and it\'s cheaper.
In San Francisco streets, there are a lot of people like a zombie that addicted from fentanyl.
>> In San Francisco streets, there are a lot of people like a zombie that are addicted to fentanyl.
I watched this documentary on YouTube last year and I couldn\'t believe it.
>> CORRECT!
First, there are a lot of Big tech company in San Francisco. >> First, there are a lot of Big tech companies in San Francisco.
Why do they take a drugs?
>> CORRECT!
Second, many people take a drugs in the street, So everyone is exposed to drugs.
>> Second, many people take drugs on the street, so everyone is exposed to drugs.
What are the polices doing?
>> What are the police doing? (** POLICE = collective noun that can be used as plural)
Walking this street is so dangerous, it is because drugs are anywhere in the street.
>> Walking this street is so dangerous, it is because drugs are anywhere on the street.
Always exposed.
>> It\'s always exposed.
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