What is the scariest story that you know?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I mentioned this story, you won\'t be able to sleep. It\'s not what I heard, it\'s what I\'ve actually been through. When I was a soldier... After night shift, I was going to sleep. Suddenly, my military colleague came in and sat down on my bed. I was trying to sleep, but he keep bothering me. So I told him to get out of here, He was quiet and told me I had money under my bed, and I looked at it, and at that moment, a hand-like figure was trying to pull me down. My head was dragged down to the floor and I could only move my eyes, but when I looked at my military colleague for help, he disappeared and I heard only his laughter.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
It still gave me shivers even if I read it for the second time.
If I mentioned this story, you won\'t be able to sleep.
>> If I tell you this story, you won\'t be able to sleep.
It\'s not what I heard, it\'s what I\'ve actually been through.
>> I didn\'t hear this from someone, I actually experienced it.
When I was a soldier...
>> It happened when I was still a soldier.
After night shift, I was going to sleep.
>> After the night shift, I was about to go to sleep.
Suddenly, my military colleague came in and sat down on my bed.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
I was trying to sleep, but he keep bothering me.
>> I was trying to sleep, but he kept bothering me.
So I told him to get out of here, He was quiet and told me I had money under my bed, and I looked at it, and at that moment, a hand-like figure was trying to pull me down.
>> So I told him to get out of here. He was quiet and told me I had money under my bed so I looked down. At that moment, a hand-like figure was trying to pull me down.
My head was dragged down to the floor and I could only move my eyes, but when I looked at my military colleague for help, he disappeared and I heard only his laughter.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
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