What is the scariest thing that ever happened to me? come in :)

Good evening [이름]-Li!
Thank you for taking the time to answer our essay question.
Your essay made cry. I could imagine how scary and traumatic that experience was for you.

When you are alone outside, you should always bring a Taser or pepper spray with you. Use them when a dangerous person approaches you.

Please take care always.
See you in class later.

~Charry

when I was stayed in USA, at first, I lived in Brooklyn

>> When I stayed in the USA, I first lived in Brooklyn.

there are very dangerous area in Brooklyn

>> There are very dangerous areas in Brooklyn.
but unfortunately My college allocated me to Brooklyn.
>> But unfortunately, my college assigned me to Brooklyn.
so, everyday I should came home before 9 pm
>> So everyday, I had to be home before 9:00PM.
oneday, My friend was very sick and she called me to go her house and help her to go hospital.

>> One day, my friend was very sick and she called me to ask me to go to her house and help her to go to the hospital.
it was 11 pm

>> It was 11:00PM.
but I don\'t have choice and I decided go her house in Manhattan.

>> But I didn\'t have a choice and decided to go to her house in Manhattan.
and I waited the train which goes Manhattan.

>> I waited for the train headed to Manhattan. 

OR >> I waited for the train bound to Manhattan. 
at that time, Two guys came to me. 

>> At that time, two guys came to me. 

but I sure that they were in drugs.

>> But I was sure that they were on drugs.
because they couldn\'t walk straight and eyes are strange.
>> It\'s because they couldn\'t walk straight and their eyes looked strange.
they said to me \'\' hey are you asian? we love asian and come here , hangout with us 

>> They said, \"Hey, are you Asian? We love Asians. Come here and hangout with us\".
so I didn\'t say anything and trying to stick to a wall.

>> I didn\'t say anything and tried to stick to the wall.
someday, my English teacher said to me that if you met dangerous people in train station, you should stick to a wall and screaming.
>> One time, my English told me that if I meet dangerous people at a the train station, I should stick myself to a wall and scream.
I struggled to get them to drag me by the wrist.

>> I struggled when they tried to drag me by the wrist.
so, they was angry and trying push me to the train rain.

>> They were angry and tried to push me to the train rails.
I was very scared.

>> CORRECT!

even I couldn\'t cry.

>> I couldn\'t even cry.