What is the significance of joining a club or an organization?
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It becomes a member of a club or an organization.
Becoming member is an important mean. This means each members should have a responsibility.
This is not competition. This is only a group. So, I think that they must do best their field.
But every club or organization does not always enjoy.
Sometimes they disagrees each other but we have to wisely solve and learn to this.
In my case, if someone didn\'t practice, I used to be very angry when I was a member of a band 5 years ago.
It could be failed due to someone and that time is wasted.
If you would join a club due to only curiosity, I don\'t recommond.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]. thank you for this. Yes, I agree. Every member should do his/her part and responsibility.
- T. Beth
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It becomes a member of a club or an organization.>>> You become a member of a club or an organization.
Becoming member is an important mean.
Becoming member is an important mean.
>>> OR: Becoming a member has a significant meaning.
This means each members should have a responsibility.
>>> correct
This is not competition.
This is not competition.
>>> This is not a competition.
This is only a group.
>>> correct
So, I think that they must do best their field.
>>> So, I think that they must do their best in their field.
>>> So, I think that they must do their best in their field.
But every club or organization does not always enjoy.
>>> But every club or organization is not always enjoyable.
Sometimes they disagrees each other but we have to wisely solve and learn to this.
>>> Sometimes they disagree with each other but we have to wisely solve and learn from this.
In my case, if someone didn\'t practice, I used to be very angry when I was a member of a band 5 years ago.
>>> Sometimes they disagree with each other but we have to wisely solve and learn from this.
In my case, if someone didn\'t practice, I used to be very angry when I was a member of a band 5 years ago.
>>> correct
It could be failed due to someone and that time is wasted.
>>> It could be a failure due to someone and that time is wasted.
It could be failed due to someone and that time is wasted.
>>> It could be a failure due to someone and that time is wasted.
If you would join a club due to only curiosity, I don\'t recommond.
>>> If you join a club due to only curiosity, I wouldn\'t recommend it.
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